We were hoping to get constructive criticism for where our piece could be improved, so that we could modify our opening and make it the best it can be.
We got feedback such as:
" The shots of the photowall should come in sooner, to create the sense of uneasiness earlier on, as there is too much footage of the dancer with little action happening "
"The music is a really good choice, as it creates a creepy mood and atmosphere to the piece"
"The slow pace of the piece works well, and the twist at the end draws you in to make you want to watch more. The slow pace fits in well the the feminine feel and the twist, however the action of the photowall should happen earlier"
All of our feedback were similar to those stated above, and it became clear that we needed to modify the piece and bring the action in quicker, to draw the audience in from the start.
Once we did this, we were fully satisfied with our piece and feel we have achieved what we set out to, and created a piece that fits in with the forms and conventions of a thriller, but in a new, fresh and unique way.
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